Category: | Maximum Ride |
Genre: | Romance |
Language: | English |
Status: | In-Progress |
Published: | 2008-06-30 15:19:29 |
Updated: | 2008-08-18 08:48:09 |
Packaged: | 2021-04-21 22:31:08 |
Rating: | T |
Chapters: | 8 |
Words: | 1,151 |
Publisher: | www.fanfiction.net |
Summary: | A series of hypothetical 100-word drabbles based on different Max ships. Added: Nudge |
1. Iggy
2. Sam
3. Fang
4. Omega
5. Ari
6. Max II
7. Angel
8. Nudge
She never
sees it.
Not in the way that I never question
her.
Not when I stumble over my words when I
feel her looking into my eyes.
Not even when I
came back, leaving my long-desired parents behind. She couldn't see
through my phony excuse.
She doesn't notice
when I shiver at her touch, or when I stare sightlessly when they're
together.
She doesn't notice that I've avoided
him lately.
She doesn't even notice that when
we say our "I love you"'s I speak only to her.
The irony is that she's the one who's so goddamn blind.
oO0Oo
AN: These are a series of hypothetical drabbles. I'm not saying that every person I write to ship with Max is in love with her.
Just to clarify that. :D
You know that you want to review. :D
Concrit is greatly appreciated.
My heart plummets whenever I think about her. I can't help but believe that I've failed her somehow.
She thought that I was one of them. I could not save her. I had to let her go. The image of her that day hangs in my mind. With tawny wings pumping she flew out of my life.
But she did not fail me. And this time I will succeed.
Now I fight for rights for those who have none, for experiments who have no families. I do it for her, and others like her. She brought me enlightenment.
My Angel.
oO0Oo
AN: Thanks for the reviews, everyone who did. :D
This one is, obviously, Sam/Max. Or Sax. Which sounds Saxy.
Reviews are adored, as is concrit (thanks Maiyri for the concrit, and Carino2, but she concritted on Fangathering, a different site).
I'm not sure what I should post next. I might do Fax, just to get the other canon pairing out of the way.
Suggestions are welcome. :D
REVIEW!
(This Author's Note is almost longer than the drabble)
The author gave me only a hundred words to describe her and what she means to me.
It's impossible! A lot like her...
We've been through so much. We've fought numerous enemies. It seems impossibly surreal.
Her with her temper that never cools, and her incredible strength. Her and her invincible stubbornness. It's impossible to deal with.
But when I think of the way that she smiles and lights up the room, and the way that she makes me feel, so warm... It's impossibly beautiful.
That's odd. The author gave me a hundred words and I only needed one.
Impossible.
oO0Oo
AN: Harsh Concrit please?
This is the last "normal" ship I'll do. I'm not sure what I'll post next. Any suggestions?
Review please. :D
I look at her, at the curve of her breast, at her slender legs, and at her determined face. It takes all of my will power to keep myself from grabbing her and taking her right here.
After all, I'm built to reproduce. What kind of super-human wouldn't be? I've never seen a real woman before, only white lab coats. I didn't realize how delectable they are.
For this reason I must beat her. I'll destroy her in every task.
When she is sent to be terminated I'll ask for one favour.
I'll ask them to give her to me.
oO0Oo
AN: Concrit please?
Thanks reviewers. :D I'm having trouble deciding between several different Ari ones. Is it weird to want a Beta for a series of drabbles?
When I
pump my wings I'm just trying not to fall.
I'm
going to die soon.
I'm really scared. I can't
tell anyone. But, for some reason, I think that she would understand.
If only she'd come with me.
She protects her flock like they're her children. She comes to him
like a lover.
I imagine him cuddled up to her,
kissing her. I want to be there, pressed against her breast, her
mouth on mine.
She would make the bad guys go
away.
She only ever helps her flock. She
doesn't think about the son that Daddy left behind.
oO0Oo
AN: Thanks to Supergirrl for beta'ing this. I owe you. :D
And to Carino2, who, as always, critted on either FG or WCF.
Concrit is welcome! Review, review, review!
I'm supposed to
memorize this mannerism, and that habit.
It's
tedious.
Well... just between you and
me, it's not.
Every flip of the hair, every
giggle, every smile, it sends shivers down my spine. I am perfection,
yet she is who I strive to be. She is beyond perfect, and that is
what makes her so tempting.
I know how Eve
must have felt when she was offered the apple. I want to touch her,
to be with her. But I am only ever supposed to be her.
I wonder what Eve would've done.
I'll take
what I can get.
oO0Oo
AN: Thanks again to Supergrrl for beta'ing tis. :D Concrit is loved.
Yay for clonecest! How squick is that?
To her, I'm
always a child.
Every touch I give is from a
daughter to a mother. Every smile is platonic.
She doesn't see that I'm a grown woman now.
She doesn't want me, but I could change that.
She told me not to do it, but it would be so easy. I could creep into
her mind, planting desires that were never there before. I could show
her that I'm beautiful and hers.
It wouldn't
take long. I know that I shouldn't, but I'll succumb to temptation.
Doing it that way is so much easier than just
telling her.
oO0Oo
AN: Once again, thanks to Supergrrl, and awesome beta. I am reading The Mists of Avalon and I think that helped inspire this. XD
Review- you know you want to!
My fingers
run through her hair, soft as silk. Her eyes are half-closed. She's
nervous; I feel her body shake beneath my hands. I murmur words of
encouragement.
She smells light, like the
wind. I can sense her wings, hidden beneath her shirt. My blood
pounds swiftly throughout my body.
"How do
I look?" She asks.
"Beautiful..."
I reply, breathless.
She smiles with anxious
satisfaction and rushes to meet her date. I try to will her to me,
hoping I could spend the night in her arms.
I
spend it in his, sobbing. He knows how I feel too well.
oO0Oo
AN: This one is entirely credited to Supergrrl. It was her idea. :D I haven't updated in a while, I went to the United Kingdom on Holidays, and so I didn't really have time.
Review please?